From fc691f719c46bd6ea923a82ccf3b5fbcface3f7e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Rachel Macfarlane <ramacfar@microsoft.com>
Date: Mon, 22 Jan 2018 13:33:44 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Update issue reporter wording, fixes #41994

---
 .../code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporter.html   | 12 ++++++------
 .../code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporterMain.ts |  6 +++---
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporter.html b/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporter.html
index 553c3d51de5..ad3010252ec 100644
--- a/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporter.html
+++ b/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporter.html
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 		<div id="issue-reporter">
 
 			<div class="input-group">
-				<label for="issue-type">This is a</label>
+				<label for="issue-type">I want to submit a</label>
 				<select id="issue-type" class="form-control">
 					<option value="0">Bug Report</option>
 					<option value="1">Performance Issue</option>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
 			<div class="input-group">
 				<div class="two-col">
-					<label for="vscode-version">VS Code version <span class="required-input">*</span></label>
+					<label for="vscode-version">VS Code Version <span class="required-input">*</span></label>
 					<input id="vscode-version" type="text" value="Loading..." disabled/>
 				</div>
 				<div class="two-col">
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 					<details>
 						<summary>My System Info
 							<input type="checkbox" id="includeSystemInfo" checked>
-								<label class="caption" for="includeSystemInfo">Send this data</label>
+								<label class="caption" for="includeSystemInfo">Send my data</label>
 							</input>
 						</summary>
 						<div class="block-info">
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 					<details>
 						<summary>Currently Running Processes
 							<input type="checkbox" id="includeProcessInfo" checked>
-								<label class="caption" for="includeProcessInfo">Send this data</label>
+								<label class="caption" for="includeProcessInfo">Send my data</label>
 							</input>
 						</summary>
 						<div class="block-info">
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 					<details>
 						<summary>My Workspace Stats
 							<input type="checkbox" id="includeWorkspaceInfo" checked>
-								<label class="caption" for="includeWorkspaceInfo">Send this data</label>
+								<label class="caption" for="includeWorkspaceInfo">Send my data</label>
 							</input>
 						</summary>
 						<pre class="block-info">
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
 					<div class="block-info-text">
 						<small>
 								We support GitHub-flavored Markdown.
-								After submitting, you will still be able to edit your issue on GitHub.
+								You will still be able to edit your issue when we preview it on GitHub.
 							</small>
 						<div id="description-validation-error" class="validation-error hidden">Please enter a description.</div>
 						<textarea name="description" id="description" cols="100" rows="15" required></textarea>
diff --git a/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporterMain.ts b/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporterMain.ts
index 898e52222bf..c5300541bde 100644
--- a/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporterMain.ts
+++ b/src/vs/code/electron-browser/issue/issueReporterMain.ts
@@ -246,9 +246,9 @@ export class IssueReporter extends Disposable {
 			hide(processBlock);
 			hide(workspaceBlock);
 
-			descriptionTitle.innerHTML = 'Steps to reproduce <span class="required-input">*</span>';
+			descriptionTitle.innerHTML = 'Steps to Reproduce <span class="required-input">*</span>';
 			show(descriptionSubtitle);
-			descriptionSubtitle.innerHTML = 'How did you encounter this problem? Clear steps to reproduce the problem help our investigation. What did you expect to happen and what actually happened?';
+			descriptionSubtitle.innerHTML = 'How did you encounter this problem? Please provide clear steps to reproduce the problem during our investigation. What did you expect to happen and what actually did happen?';
 		}
 		// 2 - Perf Issue
 		else if (issueType === 1) {
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ export class IssueReporter extends Disposable {
 			show(processBlock);
 			show(workspaceBlock);
 
-			descriptionTitle.innerHTML = 'Steps to reproduce <span class="required-input">*</span>';
+			descriptionTitle.innerHTML = 'Steps to Reproduce <span class="required-input">*</span>';
 			show(descriptionSubtitle);
 			descriptionSubtitle.innerHTML = 'When did this performance issue happen? For example, does it occur on startup or after a specific series of actions? Any details you can provide help our investigation.';
 		}